Went through another set of revisions tonight, and I think I'm about as far as I can go by the deadline for submission to Magic City Writers (tomorrow). The story still needs some tightening and unifying (especially the action scenes), but I'm reasonably pleased, and curious what the group has to say.
Whew! Been hard work, getting it all together, but I'm glad to have a group keeping me accountable!
Good night, all, and I'll report new stuff as it comes up. Probably time to start a new story, soon!